Death comes knocking

Oh my gosh Grant, this was just amazing, thanks for recommending i read it. this was one of the most powerful poems i have read from you, it really made m think a lot about my brother, i mean life is so fragile which is why you have to be grateful for every minute and live with out regret. death is so sudden and unexpected in some cases and often leaves people with out being able to say their final good bye or i love you. (that's the really tragic part about death) I am sure that this poem has left many people thinking about their own life's and how fragile life is, a great write, very powerful and had me thinking the whole way through.

Time. Who can stop time. Besides all feelings, happiness, time plays a bigger role.
And the uncertainty of it, does scare me at times too. Lovely write Grant. Muah. TC

This is an exelent poem grant , I see you still have your expressive flow, 5/5...Jim

The poem is beautiful, Grant.
Including your wife in it is just so sweet:)))
No man goes before his time is due, I hope yours is a very long time away.
I want to hug you virtually for a long, long time to come!

5/5 Ingrid

Grant,

I like this a lot. You have created a vivid picture here. Your unwillingness to go with the reaper evident, as are the reasons. So much left unsaid. so many wrongs to put right..loved ones to hold tight.

This poem effectively points out how precious life is and how we often do not realise this until our lives are threatened. I realise how you must have had to imagine yourself in that very position to write this poem.

A very good job done here.

Michael