This nauseating sadness doesn't mean it's all over...
At least that's what this nervous voice keeps telling me.

my best part of teh poem ,

each line hold soo much meaning and i am sure every one can relate to every word ..

feel the roughness of the life, ... how many are the pple that can really NOT feel it roughness, life is never fair , take more than she give...

teh scream within that voice that want to get out , and want to yell in the face of destiny and make a stand and express the anger adn the depression that life make us feel

that organ beating in your chest!! ,,,.. that education , was extreeemly good line to use the way you did ..... that organ that keep beating no matter how the hurt inside is hard and the tirdness is great !! ... he endure and keep beating ...

frozen !! and ice of impatience... ice and impatience are opposit words used here, and i can understand the meaning behind it , impatience to wait for what!!, the impatience waiting for something to happen , something to be done , ?? .... so he can continue beating the way he sued to beat , ...

great expressions..

eager for that romance .... how can you define romance ,when each heart have it's own dictionary , and this is the beauty of this line that can give the reader a chance to relate , and i hope you can relate to your life tooo,

th last 2 are my favorites
\This nauseating sadness doesn't mean it's all over...
At least that's what this nervous voice keeps telling me.
sadness, all over, and waiting for a romance? somthing is not quiet coming in a fit ... in my opignion

it is like somone is waiting for somthing to be over , or wonder if it is over , to have a new romance , ,,,,

it is over, when your partner say ,i think we need a break!,and leave you hanging like a puppet.. they are the last days , of a ending love .. whre he spit hsi last breath , and they are the most painful when you see a part go away and not be able to return it , no matter how you tried....

nervous voice.... keep telling you ... that nervous voice is the voice of the weak truth that no one accpet , ... the voice of the weak reality taht keep tell you to let go and you dont want to and supress it !!... this si the part where you will be most confused ,....

it is the most inspirational poem i ever read , soo short yet so meanfull, yu always have my vote , on these

take care !! and keep writing !!