River (Haiku)

Very good poem. It was short and to the point. Nice word use. Hmm, I don't know what else to say. I gave it a 5/5. =)

You've hit it perfectly on this one. Such a poem with vivid description. There is definatly a hidden meaning behind this poem and it's something to get the readers to think about. :] Great job, 5/5.

Ingrid,

I can see what you mean here. The impurities of life, the nastiness, the sadness, the unhappy tears..all filtered away until the waters run clear once more. Life's essence has breathed renewed life into a clouded soul.

Well done Ingrid, I love the way your mind works.

((hugs))

Michael

Beautiful and poignant, sublime.

This is such a simple yet meaningful haiku that is a joy to read. I really liked your wording, it made the reader grasp each word. Nice work, 5/5 from me. Keep writing, always and forever....