Comments : Sunlight

  • 16 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Splashes of sunlight
    chasing away the dark
    reigniting my internal fire
    joy for life, God' s holy spark

    The start itself gives such warmth. A simple write yet it portrays great depth. LOvey read.
    take care.

  • 16 years ago

    by Bhavin

    Wow Ingrid Ma'am,

    This poem oozes so much positive vibrations. Its a very good poem. Nice use of personification. The word usage is short, simple and easily understandable. The poem gives me visuals so I guess this poem has done its job of making a reader understand the poem. Amazing write.

    Regards,
    Bhavin

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Ingrid,

    friends make the good times and the bad times that much better. This describes how a true friend can make all the difference in a person's life. Faith in God shines brightly in this one.

    Well done ((hugs))

    Michael

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    How much a friend can do to somone he care about , a frined is the little voice that lead us in hour darkness and when we refuse to see he make us see, and when we need teh lies he tell us the truth

    keep wirting ingrid ,

    i love this one

  • 16 years ago

    by Emily

    Mmmhmmm the Savior is good! Well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    This poem was great from the very start till the end. It was very pleasant read. I gave it a 5/5 because everything was good about it.

  • 15 years ago

    by SADADDY

    Smiles and warmth is felt in these words. Enjoyed the read, great work.

    Sadaddy