Darkness to Light.

by Fantasy   Oct 29, 2008


Looking threw this foggy window makes me wonder,
What am I in this world?
Better yet,
Who am I?

The world is spinning,
But I'm standing still,
How can I break the silence,
And make my life mine?

It's harder than it looks,
Trust me I know.

The depth is threatening,
Holding me by a string,
Begging it not to let go.

The darkness is taking over,
Draining me of my power of what is right,
The light, keeps me alive.

Save me tonight,
Before its to late,
Show me the light,
And I'll be fine

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  • 16 years ago

    by OmniLotus

    ^_^ yet again another creative one.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ezra

    Cool that sounds like some of my own but mine are worded diferently, and are........well their probaly the same leath but hay i'm still no good at things like this , you peaple how write thes hing, thease poems your all so good......i dont know why i write bt i do and when i do i can never make any ting as well writen as you or the others, all my work is bad and pointless, i try hard to write what i wont but its like some thing els tacks ofer and i can never write what i wont to. well bye!
    sorry that was randum.....
    ---DJ

  • 16 years ago

    by Evil One

    Nice poem it had a good flow to it

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