by Beautiful Forever Oct 29, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I thought what I was doing was right, |
I love the play on |
by Hollymariee
Nice wording , and the rhymes are really good and seem to flow perfectly . There's really nothing bad to say , 5/5 |
To me that is the ultimate task of a poem is to reach the one it was written for I may know everything about iambic pentameter but I know beauty and this poem is beautiful |
by Milla
Fantastic. Wonderful really. |
by Dark Savior
I thought what I was doing was right, |