Wooow, this was stunning. Drown Me With Syringes, for some reason I really loved the title, it really captured my attention so very easily so I couldn't resist to read. I'm glad I did. The flow was yet again flawless and the word choice was also very good, some words really sounded great and made the poem a great success. I loved the repetition in this poem, it definatly worked to your advantage and made the opem that much better. Well done! |