Wow. that was really amazing. i really like this poem. makes me really like fire! keep it up! 10/5 ~KM~

I know i already commented but personally i think you should have gotten a A++++++ till infinity. 5/5 love ~KM~

Yah this was really good,
and you should have gotten more than A!
keep up!
ill be reading
xD tnx anyways

This is wonderful, only one change:
"Only leave a slight mark."
Only leave a subtle mark, maybe?
It sounds a bit more formal.

Anyway, instead of this being the typical "the river was tranquil" or "trees swaying" type poem this was more raw and truthful. I like that.
I also really like how you made the descriptions fit into a mini story, it all kept me reading it and liking it.

A very well deserving A, I must say.
Sorry this is kind of short, I can't think of anything else to say..
Oh, I like the use of punctuation a lot.

5/5

jess ~