For some reason this made me feel terribly sad as if i knew you were waiting in vain, this is a very melancholy poem and very well written

Grant

Very well written and the flow is very good. It is sad, sitting and waiting on your love to arrive, watching the waters run.

Flawless flow in a very neat package
well deserving of recognition

Such beautiful words that create a sense of sadness. The descriptions blew me away and although this piece was short, you proved you can say all you want in such little amount of words. Great write, congrats on the win! 5/5 from me. Keep writing, always and forever....