by PassionCourageTriumph Oct 30, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
A tunnel of doors connecting two places, |
by Saving Grace
This is sooo good! it so descritive and deep. I really loved this write! Honestly you did such an excellent job at describing yourself here. Really enjoyable and powerful read. Keep up the awesome writes and i will most certainelty keep reading them! 5/5 |
by demia
I was reading this poem & i truly wanted to hear more! |
I dont know about your ending comment although it is always good to add them to a poem like this but I understood the story pretty well and it was told exceptionally well in an off beat sort of way , and since you stated at the bottom tha it was a dream then the vagueness of it all seems to enhance the story even more , Very well written Kayla you definately have a lot of talent young lady |