I dont know about your ending comment although it is always good to add them to a poem like this but I understood the story pretty well and it was told exceptionally well in an off beat sort of way , and since you stated at the bottom tha it was a dream then the vagueness of it all seems to enhance the story even more , Very well written Kayla you definately have a lot of talent young lady
5/5...Jim

I was reading this poem & i truly wanted to hear more!
it was very deep & mind whirling!
but i loved it.
keep up the good work.

This is sooo good! it so descritive and deep. I really loved this write! Honestly you did such an excellent job at describing yourself here. Really enjoyable and powerful read. Keep up the awesome writes and i will most certainelty keep reading them! 5/5