You must really love her a lot, to still want to be there for her even though she is going out with other men....I take my hat off for you, you are a true ladies-fan!
The poem is beautiful, don't change anything:)

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

Waw, sacrifice for love. It's crazy so much things one can accept for the one he/she loves. You had a great heart and i can feel this through your poem. Some women don't know the chance they had. Excellent write, kel.

Beautiful flow. beautiful meaning. beautiful poem.
5/5

Love it this is a poem worth reading good job keep it up