by Courageous Dreamer Oct 30, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
The first time we parted, I was ripped into shreds, |
by Brittany C
Great poem I really liked it. I gave it a 5/5 I saw nothing wrong with it. |
by ether
*By a better vocabulary than usual I mean what you usually find on this site. |
by ether
"The first time we departed my heart was ripped to shreds," |
The flow and word usage were decent in this poem. The concept was a little cliche, but you've written on it beautifully! I really did enjoy reading this poem. |
by Ingrid
How nice to see you write a happy poem, Temps. Not too long ago I commented to such a sad poem by you. I am happy for you that you and your boyfriend were able to patch things up again. |