I really do think this is a beautiful write, the flow was ok but your chioce of wording was great =] really greaat job!

I love the flow of well written free verse This poem made me feel with romantic imagery and share in your longing

Beautiful poem i really liked it. The wording was very nice. The flow was great through out the poem. I gave it a 5/5

No more candle light,
No more orange moons.
No one in the distance,
As my heart slowly dies.

This is my favorite stanza Joe, I keep going back to read it and I like the vivid picture that I get in my mind. I think you did a fantastic job with this title, thanks so much for entering the contest, it was a pleasure to read, great job!

I've memorized your face,
I dream of where you are.
Wish this never happened,
The awful way that it did.

I'd stop the world
If only I could
Just talk with you
One more time.

^^I love these two verses the most. I think the second part is how everyone feels when they lose someone close to them. Not assuming that it's about that, or factual, but to me, it seems as though the narrator has just lost someone very very close to them. And no one should go through anything like that.^^
Very well written, Joe. I love it. Great job.
=5/5=
~Bella<3