by Alliey May Oct 30, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
A wet rainy day |
by Dan
I like the emotion. It's pretty dandy. |
I thought you had a good start here, but a few of your lines have too many syllables which throws off your flow. A few quick fixes here and there and you could greatly improve it. |
by Kuro
I like how the title fit well at the end of the poem. it was my favorite part. |
by Jessica
Wow i like it. good job!!! |