Starlight

by xToBeWithYoux   Oct 30, 2008


I close my eyes and open them again,
I have to be sure that you are real.

For this God-like being in front of me,
he cannot exist in the same world as I do.
Yet all of the imaginations in the world
would not be able to conjure this perfection.

I saw you only one second ago,
but you have changed my life forever.

My world was full of darkness,
a moonless night.
Then you entered my worthless existence,
sky now flooded with your starlight.

I'll never let you go,
because in this endless moment,
I have already fallen in love with you.

But when the Sun rises in the morning,
the starlight fades away.
Will you fade away?

Please don't fade away.
Please don't fade.
Please don't.
Please.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    Awe .. This is adorable . I wouldn't call it dark though , you might want to change the category . I really do like the whole starlight fading idea , I really can't get over that . Your ideas flow really well idea , and your wording is decent too . Well done , 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Very different style of writting then I am use to seeing, however; I liked it. The flow was good and the overall use of your wording was well thought out. The only thing I didn't really like about it was the structure, it was all over the place, some stanzas were 2 lines, some 3, some 4, etc. I personally think it would be better if all the stanzas were the same length. Excellent job, keep up the good work.

    Peace, Joe

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