I really enjoyed this poem it was different and unique, awesome job although i noticed you missed the 'u' in colour. I also loved the way how this poem was structured, again this was a perfect style for the poem and it made the flow easier to follow! Brilliant job =]

I really enjoyed reading this poem. I like the feelings it gives. Well written, keep it up, kel.

Wow i really like it. it describes what so many people say to themselves.. tomorrow.... its always tomorrow.
great flow.
5/5

That was a very unique poem ! 5/5
I love it

This poem was very unique, i haven't seen one like it. It has a good rhyme and you used good structure.

" just not tonight" reminds me of some people who say they will do something over and over again but they never do.

Great peom. 5/5

I like the description of each color and also the way you have said things without giving away too much. Good one!
Take care.

Your poem was truly superior and amazing, the way you start this poem and how it evolves just takes my breath away. the way you used colors and made them for a bitter ending. I really loved it.

This was a rather unique piece as I haven't read one similar to it before, so points for that. I like how in a way it relates to everybody as we all procrastinate and tell ourselves we'll do things and then keep pushing them aside. Overall it was a good poem and it had good flow and word choice...5/5 GG23

This is awesome! I wasn't sure exactly what the colors were representing until the 5th stanza, which is great, because it kept me enthralled and curious. (: Form, cadence, everything was great. I haven't read a piece quite like this before, it was very refreshing. Keep them coming!

Amazing job! im speechless! :)