Heh. I like this poem alot. I'm sure it can be related well with a majority of people. And you broke away from your usual unrhymed scheme! Can't say don't like it though :) Keep it up
Aken Sol

Dude, thats an awesome idea. I'm sure everybody that reads this is going to interpret this different, but i think the wisest (humans) and the least wise/dumbest (every living creature under humans) ..is cool metaphor.

Kinda makes U think...hmmm

Nice write:)