Grant You have once again outdone yourself
The beauty expressed is amazing . You know life gives us so many different things that effect us deeply and when one is not acceptable for the moment we always have so much to reflect back on , and the knowledge that sometime soon they will come full circle for us to enjoy once again.
Beautifully written My friend. 5/5...Jim

Ah this was so beautiful. its not often you see someone actually being grateful for the most important gifts in ones life. the world has seriously become so so materialistic and its so often that people forget what they really have and the most important and irreplaceable gifts which they have been given. a truly beautiful piece, great job!!

Oh grant, this is indeed a great message. You have kind heart and through this poem i can tell you that you are being blessed. Each time i read your poems it inspired me so much. The messages you gave it really do speaks to my heart. Keep it up, kel.

This is truly a wonderful poem. We should all reflect back on the things that life has given us. Our family, our friends, and all those wonderful gifts that we cant live without. This poem was quite touching, and it's a great poem to share with those people that you love. Your brothers, your sisters, your mom and your dad.. and let them know how appreciative you are to have them. Those things are truly life's gifts to you and you should hold them close to you. Wonderful write. I enjoyed this very much. Great job, you have so much talent! 5/5. (:

Hey Grant, couldn't agree more than how simple pleasure in life are the biggest gifts afterall. Often at times, one tends to forget how all these blessings are shunned, pushed aside, with self pity and dejection. The message here is truly wonderful- a reminder. Thanks, I suppose I needed this too! TC

Amazing poem filled with such sincerity and humility that instantly captures the heart of the reader. And yet it is a silent reminder to all of us that one should look at all that which we have and be thankful for all the gifts the God has given us.
A wonderful write that is deservant of praise more than that which can be given. 5/5 from me.

Great writing, with great meaning. It really puts everything in perspective, showing what's really important in life. 5/5

Sarah