Good poem. The ryhming and wording really kept the flow going. I gave it a 5/5. I saw nothing wrong with this poem. Nice job.

I really liked this poem, you through in some great descriptive language that just had me smiling. I love when people reword things. Sorry if this poem reflects your true feelings:( I too have had my share of bad memories...but this poem was really enjoyable and I would recommend it to most confused girls
5/5