by AngelicDecadence Nov 1, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
Death and burning flames... |
by Marvellous
This reminds me of my poem, *Holes of Fire*. It really tells deep, of your understanding on this. Amazing.. |
He is the keeper of the dead, |
Very powerful! absolutely loved it!! |
Another one of your poems that is not my favourite. The flow seems to come and go, and the ideas behind the poem seem a bit atskew at moments. But, the main idea is very original, and it is presented in a way that isn't disgustingly childish or familiar. Thank you |
by Spirit
Hey I never thought of it as having to indure satan's hell and not my own. love the idea. At some points in your poem I did get lost a little bit, but that's probaly because some parts read differently than they would if you were writting a short story not a poem. |