by Rachel RTVW Nov 1, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Sands of time, a world sublime |
by Ingrid
An intensely sad poem, written in what appears to be a very difficult format. |
Great job!! i really like it! |
by Sylvia
I enjoyed reading this. The use of this form was excellent and the emotions are heartfelt. I applaud you on a job well done. |
Very nice! and great job following the rhyme scheme. very emotion-felt. thanks for sharing! |
by Meena Krish
I like this form also the write itself is really good. So much of it is so true about life and people. I've not heard of this form..should try it. Excellent write. |