His Song

by meganmarie   Nov 1, 2008


His song is filled with tragic words
torn paper hearts, is he the same?

screaming for love
whisper for hate
in his mind
it's all deceit

the mirror beside him
it shows nothing
black empty holes
why is it there?

lost his heart
she's such a pretty girl
sad truth about it
doesn't know he exists

what is he seeing?
it seems so unreal
i can't see what you see
is it fake? is it real?

his thoughts are racing
sickening ideas
corrupting his mind
he won't be the same

his story is filled with tragic words
torn paper hearts, he'll never be the same

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  • 15 years ago

    by AnCi

    Wooooow!! I really loved this poem! Great job!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Benny Boi

    Very nice... deep, well writen and very very good!

    Awsome Write!

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael Verterel

    Nice, brilliant poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Adam Murphy

    Wow. i've left alot of comments in my time just trying to be nice.....but i truly admire the way you wrote this poem. I can easily relate to it as if i had written it myself in the third person. Really good. Deserves ALOT more attention then its gotten so far.