Comments : Pathfinding Melody

  • 16 years ago

    by Trying to find the words

    Wow.. This has so much meaning to it,
    You brought me into this completely with your words!
    Very deep I love it

  • 15 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Very deep write, I liked the meaning behind this poem and your choice of words was greatly chosen. I would like to see this divided up into stanzas which would make the flow a bit better as well as the structure. But overall a wonderful write, keep up the good work.

    Peace, Joe