Comments : Crises ( pleiades)

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    I loved this! It makes you take some time out of your hectic lives and really think about whats going on in the world around us, the message was so powerful and full of meaning. You said so much in such a short poem and I applaud you on that. Very well done, thank you for sharing.

    *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    I think you mean crisis instead of crises.

    I liked this poem. I've written quite a few antigovernment-proworld poems in my day, and I love to see others write them as well.

    You did the poem wonderfully with an array of C starting words.

    I don't see the need for a period in the last line seeing how nothing else got one.

    It was a good poem. I really liked it.

    Five out of five.

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