by Beautiful Chaos Nov 2, 2008
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
I wander cold, when all is told, |
by Cindy
Jenn |
by Nobodys Hero
This poem had a good rhyming flow =] I also think the name of this poem you chose is really well suited, excellent job |
by Rachel RTVW
Excellent !!! A sad piece. It flows well, the rhyming is not forced and you did a great job adhering to the rules of the form! |