Awww... this is wonderful but im a little confused. is he dead? well anyways this was amazing. 10/5 ~KM~

This is a wonderful piece of work you have written, you have painted a vivid picture that allows the reader to see what is happening. Thank you for sharing it with us. May peace and joy fill your heart eachand everyday.

Sadaddy

This is so sad. its an amazing piece. i love how you wrote it.
i love it how it starts out, you get us thinking that she is just mad at you and then wow does it change.
fantastic.
awesome.
magnificent.
your poem expresses great creativity.
5/5