Chosen

by Broke&Lost   Nov 2, 2008


I can't help her now
she's chosen her way
But to her I vow
to find a way for her to stay

A reason to live here
in a world she hates
Surrounded in her fears
she sits there and waits

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  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    Very well done. I enjoyed the poem, it was very short, but that didn't taken away from the poem at all.

    I think that his poem is very well done, direct to the point and didn't tip-toe around the subject for lines upon lines, it would have halped the hype but other than that, I think that the poem was very well done.

    5/5

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