Is The Love There Yet?

by chris   Nov 2, 2008


I'm here, so tell me what you must,
Hidden questions you don't want to ask, is there something you're afraid to unmask?
Lets share each others secrets, until we get to commitment,
Let our love fall for each other, let love know one another like sisters and brothers.
Tell me how fast you fell for me, tell me everything you want to know about me.
Just because I say, "I Love you."
You're not sure if you do yet, then you shouldn't have to say so too.
If true love isn't there yet,
No need to rush.
Lets just put our relationship to work, stop lust, make love.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lena

    Chris!!! Haha this is REALLLLLY good. Good doesnt even describe how good it is! lol But DO you love her?

  • 16 years ago

    by AngelicDecadence

    Hmm... this was better then the last. Try maybe separating the lines, add another line where each coma is, the poem will seem longer and the rhyming will be easier to find. (remember these are only suggestions) It will also help the flow.
    Good job though,
    *Chaotic Angel*