really great poem but it was really sad

that poems beautiful-sad, but beatiful. whats worse is, i think a lot of us can relate. i kno i can...great job, keep writing!

very good poem....also very sad

your poem was great, really nicely rhymed. and it makes alot of sence keep up da good work and if u get a chance check out some of my poems mwa!

omg this poem is amazing, wow its so touching yet so so sad at the same time, wow, brilliant, i luv it
luv georgie, read my poems if ya hav time!
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GIRL THIS WAS A GREAT POINT I HOPE NO ONE EVER HAS TO GO THROUGH SOMETHING IN THEIR LIFE SO BAD TO MAKE THEM WANT TO KILL THEMSELVES

Hey! wow that poem is awsome and scary too. I can totally relate. i know hearing people say "i know how feel" gets old cause no one could possible know how some one else feels. so im just gonna say i can relate. Right now i wish i could just go and kill myself. i dont think any one would notice let alone care. but suicide aint the way to go. as much as you want to dont ever do it. i dont get any good attention from my parents either. in fact my dad almost went to jail for abusing me. but things should get better. i hope they do. if you ever wanna talk let me know! but yea GREAT GREAT poem. keep writing i look forward to reading more.(pls check out my poems. vote and comment on them too i would like to know what you think.) my email address is boicrazigrl18@yahoo.com my sn is flirtinblonde19 just email me or i.m me.
much love,
~Kay~

that was so well written...tragic story :-(

love,
danielle

wow... amazing... i can relate... hope u can visit my spot =) read the object =) u'll understand why once u get there... ciao...

I hate poems on suicide because they are so sad, make you want to cry. This is good!!

WOWOW DONT DO IT! If ur still alive, pls keep writing more, that was awesome.

that was an awesome poem, where do you get your insperation

when I wanted to write suicide note to my parents I didnt know how to write all i wanted to tell them,but you hit the spot what I really wanted to tell them!Keep writing..Ciao

Okay...Creepy

kinda confused by the end bit???