Before You Even Came

by Sorinity   Nov 3, 2008


So so alone, now that your gone,
Before you even came, I missed you.
We would have loved you more than anything
Before you even came, you were taken away.

Now I feel this hole where you were,
This empty space, a void you used to fill.
You meant the world, you were the world,
All before you even came.

You are gone now before we saw you,
before we held you,
before you even came.

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  • 12 years ago

    by *emmax*

    It makes me feel a great sense of loss!its devastating

    That is the beauty of it,it carries abroad what it was meant to!

    Powerful

  • 15 years ago

    by SadieAnne

    I Loved It ! :D It Was Short , But It Gave Me A Big Idea Of What Youu Where Talking About . Was It A Miscarraige ?? Cause , Well , Im Only 14 But I Had This Dream I Was Pregnent And It Felt Really Real ! And I Could Actually Feel It Inside Me ... And I Felt Really Connected To It ! And When I Woke Up , I Cried My Eyes Out Cause It Was Gone . And I Felt Really Empty After . :(

  • 16 years ago

    by xxxStarSxxx

    Wow, that was deep. It struck somethingin me and it made me realize some things about my life. All in three stanzas. Thank you.

    There is one thing that is really bugging me. My friends call me a grammar freak... in this line:
    "Now I feel this whole where you were"
    "whole" should be "hole"

    Thats all! 5/5 <3

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