Comments : The last of the summer wine

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    This poem was fictional, sweet Samia.
    I made a challenge for myself to write about an older woman who is losing her husband due to an illness:)

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a sad and moving but wonderful portrayal of love. The detail offered the reader is outstanding. You really feel this person's desperate need to create an eternal image of her partner in the mind and cling tight to it forever.
    Beautifully and sensitively written, Ingrid.
    All the very best,
    Ben