Comments : When i lost you.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lameez Petersen

    This is so sad and the sadness is felt throughout the peom.

    Allow me to comment a bit on space... it would give more flow and also allow the reader easy access if you create spacing inbetween stanzas

  • 16 years ago

    by xX the left behind Xx

    Tnx for the help..much love. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by William

    I agree with Lameez...