Cute poem. 5/5

This is a really cute poem. i loved it, it made me smile. very well done. 5/5

Kalee

You gave me a smile this morning. Very cute and well written.

Very nice write its halarious! I also liked how you used rhyming scheme to further the poem. When I read this I could get such a clear image of a dust bunny, I look forward to reading your other work

Well, all I've got to say is that it was funny. I really enjoyed this piece. I remember when imaginary people existed. :D

.:CiiNDY:.

Lollll, this was very adorable. :] Cute little note at the bottom... I kind of wondered who Fluffy the dust bunny was ;] Anyways, this was great.. anyone who can make someone laugh has definite talent when it actually comes to writing a humerous poem. Well done. I enjoyed the piece, made me smile.

5/5

Hey there is another poem about jeff the mad bunny its in my favs maybe you should check it out.

other then that i have never heard a bunny smoke lead sweatness, i know you have never heard this but sometimes grammer and punction takes away from the fun of writing poetry. just wanted to say it
other then that this poem is actually kinda funny it made me chuckle.
Raindrops-
5/5

Awww... that was soo cute and funny. that... was very entertaining. good job. 5/5 ~KM~

Before i read your comment and the bottom i was thinkin hummm well ok:S? but its a cute and funny poem haha 5/5 Nb

This is an adorable poem. I like how you came up with it. It remindes me of the dust bunny under my bed, that might not be there anymore since my mom vaccumed. I like how you ended it. Good rhyming job. 5/5

AAww,,, it's a cute poem. Very enjoyable. The flow is kind of off for me, but I don't mind because it's nice. (if that makes sense) Though I do like the rhyme scheme.I like the image I got in my head lol