Just Friends

by claire   Nov 4, 2008


Your hands around my waist
Bring so many lovely thoughts
My mind often wanders
Into an unfamiliar dreamland
Whose thoughts make my heart soar above the trees
Your eyes like the color of the sky at dawn
Bring memories so fond
Your hand brushes mind
In a second lasting eternity
If only dreams could come true
In a world of "just friends"....

i know its not my best but comments would be very much appreciated

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  • 15 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    This was so good. It was powerful and descriptive. Enjoyed the read! keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lameez Petersen

    Its weired that feeling like this with only a friend can disrupt your entire world. Short but nice written.... well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by William

    I enjoyed it... I've felt similar...Thanks for this it helps me put words to my thoughts and feelings...