Broken girl

by Jasmine   Nov 4, 2008


Broken girl within her cries

Pretty girl on the outside lies

Broken girl within her dies

Pretty girl on the outside thrives.

Broken girl has so many fears

Pretty girl will never shed a tear

Broken girl has given up on life

Pretty girl gets through it without strife.

Broken girl her true persona

Pretty girl hides her in a coma

Broken girl needs to be revealed

Pretty girl will keep her sealed.

Broken girl with a crack in her skull

Pretty girl reduced to a porcelain doll

Broken girl finally coming out

Pretty girl now ceases to shout.

Broken girl has now prevailed

Pretty girl can only wail

Broken girl getting the help she needs

Pretty girl finally begins to receed.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Samuel Dimafelix

    I loved your style! Its too emotional piece. Keep it up.

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I love how you wrote this. Repeating the kine broken girl was a brillant idea. This poem expresses so much pain and I can tell you put your heart in this poem. Nice work. Shanik

  • 15 years ago

    by silvertung69

    Sounds to me like your a truth seeker,
    nice job!

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