Comments : Broken girl

  • 15 years ago

    by silvertung69

    Sounds to me like your a truth seeker,
    nice job!

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I love how you wrote this. Repeating the kine broken girl was a brillant idea. This poem expresses so much pain and I can tell you put your heart in this poem. Nice work. Shanik

  • 15 years ago

    by Samuel Dimafelix

    I loved your style! Its too emotional piece. Keep it up.