Unbearable...

by Bhavin   Nov 4, 2008


What kind of ailment am I having
That seems to be uncurable
Life's going on happily
Still I feel her absence unbearable.

What kind of attraction does she have
That I fall for her and feel gullible
Life's going on happily
Still I feel her absence unbearable.

When I don't have the desire to get her
Then why am I scared to lose her
Life's going on happily
Still I feel her absence unbearable.

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  • 16 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    Im speechless this poem was amazing

  • 16 years ago

    by kelleyana

    This is beautiful, i can feel the desire of longing and wishing, make it a dream come true. Keep it up, kel.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lameez Petersen

    A lovely peace of work.... It sometimes help me to write down things i can not express and your poem has reflection on many people.. that i'm sure of.

    well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by William

    I can feel this one..and I normally can't feel a connection with poems, I'm dealing with similar stuff in my life right now... Good luck let me know if it works for ya, might help me decide what to do...

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    When you feel this strongly for a woman you should go after her sweetheart. Life is so short and you have to grab whatever happiness you can get. Your memories of love are all you take with you when you leave this earth one day. Be sure you have plenty of them to keep you company in the after life;)

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid
    ps: lovely poem, the repetition made it stand out!

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