Wow waht a great poem, i really liked it, i also love the end, you had great imagery and i could feel the vengeance, nice write maybe u can read one of mine.

Oh this is great, so much imaginations, lots of suspense. Well i think you should not seek to revenge this guy, just ignore him but for the future this should teach you a good lesson, one is a mistake, twice is purpose.
Keep it up, i really like your unique style, kel.

Yer i agree!! this is great Great imagination and emotion in this poem!!!!!