Comments : The aftershock of a break-up.

  • 15 years ago

    by William

    I loved it...I hear ya, felt the same all too often... 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Sourav

    This is quite emotional. I liked the emotion and the description of it. But the structure and the flow could have been better. Overall it's good.

  • 15 years ago

    by Conrad

    No problems here at all. A perfect poem. I liked every second of it.

    Creating figures and shapes which fuel the imagination,
    And are the elements of dreams.

    Very nice. The flow is great, but I think Sourav maybe cannot relate as well, so to the ignorant of the feeling, it seems out of place, when it is really spot on.

    Great job.

  • 15 years ago

    by RJ

    Very good poem. felt like i was actually there!

  • 15 years ago

    by Captivat3d

    Great job! I can totally relate to this poem. Of course, everyone has gone through a break up but you can't spend your life sad about it, life is too short for that. But yeah, keep it up (:

  • 15 years ago

    by writersxblock

    That was a great poem! your talented girl! keep it up:p

  • 15 years ago

    by writersxblock

    That was a great poem! your talented girl! keep it up:p