by Daisy if you do Nov 4, 2008
category :
Life, society /
patriotism
Relict of a union |
I like the effeects used in this piece, few words in each line but all says so much clearly. It was in the last stanza that really got me and tied the emotion. |
by Sourav
It's a good theme to write a poem. Thought provoking indeed. Significant write. |
I'd pick my favorite part but by the end it was the whole poem lol You said a lot in these small well worded lines, very thought provoking. Great job! |
by Wishmaster
SWEET! Like it a lot! |
by Cindy
Kay |