WoW! The minimalist power and authoratative voice of this poem belies the meaning I took away from it. Very touching and powerful.

Wow! This is a powerful and thought provoking piece. Excellent job!

Kay
you did an awesome job on this poiece. This should get a lot of people thinking.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

SWEET! Like it a lot!

I'd pick my favorite part but by the end it was the whole poem lol You said a lot in these small well worded lines, very thought provoking. Great job!

It's a good theme to write a poem. Thought provoking indeed. Significant write.

I like the effeects used in this piece, few words in each line but all says so much clearly. It was in the last stanza that really got me and tied the emotion.
Lovely piece.