Comments : Imbroglio of Fortune

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Somewhere, I tilt my head with all the charm of a child with the fangs of an adder
    and playfully lick the edges of a broken dagger
    staring into the irascible eyes of an uncouth something.

    I really like htis stanza, it made me smile^^. i really liked the poem as a whole, the description was also great, nice poem maybe u can read one of mine.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ares

    Whenever I read one of your poems I see myself ten years from now in a bookshop somewhere staring at the cover of your new bestseller with the same vacant look in my eyes which have become my signature whenever I read something that blows my mind away.

    This one was no exeption! You rock, Miss T!