This poem is amazing . Very easy to relate to . It paints a strongly emotional picture . Each line flows so nicely into the next .. I have nothing bad to say at all . 5/5

I really liked this poem. I can really relate to it. The emotions shown through out the whole poem are great. Everything about this poem is great. The flow is strong through out and the wording was great and different. I have not read a poem quite like this one. I gave it a 5/5.

I agree with the other commentators that this poem is really easy to relate to. I was a little confused at the beginning btu I was also instantly pulled in. I really felt that panic and emotion. Thanks for a great read!

It's good, not great. It is relatively easy to relate to, because it's hard to get over people, obviously. But this poem has been done so many times, I'm surprised I finished reading it. Subject matter aside, I like the way most of it worked together to create... almost a sense of darkness (?) I don't know if it was supposed to or not. Here and there though it's like you use words that aren't exactly right for context and it makes me unsure if you know what they mean or just like the sound. If anything, you're on your way. Keep writing! 4/5