Star-crossed lovers

Thank you for commenting on my poem i didnt think ne body read them. i read a couple of your poems and i think you r great with your words i should learn a thing or two from you. this poem is wonderful keep it up R+J

I liked the questions asked in this poem, and I am happy to see you used some puncuation, example, "?" However, that is not enough, puncuation is very important in poetry.

Overall I liked the flow and structure of the poem. Nice choice of words, keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

Fantastic! The flow was ok. The poem itself was amazing. Emotion is one heck of a thing isnt it?

I liked the rythem how you did the "Do you know?" "do you feel" "is it true" at the begginging. it really tied into the poem.

Wow i havent read a happy love poem in a while, it kinda touched, i loved the last stanza nice work.