by BK Butterfly
5/5 for me! :D it's really gorgeous! |
Wow i havent read a happy love poem in a while, it kinda touched, i loved the last stanza nice work. |
I liked the rythem how you did the "Do you know?" "do you feel" "is it true" at the begginging. it really tied into the poem. |
Fantastic! The flow was ok. The poem itself was amazing. Emotion is one heck of a thing isnt it? |
I liked the questions asked in this poem, and I am happy to see you used some puncuation, example, "?" However, that is not enough, puncuation is very important in poetry. |
by Adam
Thank you for commenting on my poem i didnt think ne body read them. i read a couple of your poems and i think you r great with your words i should learn a thing or two from you. this poem is wonderful keep it up R+J |