I Lay Here With You Till The Final Good Bye

by X Harlea X   Nov 5, 2008


Sitting next to you from morning till night
Your beauty is such a beautiful sight.
Holding your hand and creasing it
Our hands are a perfect fit.
Nothing invading our time together
Our love just keeps getting better and better.

No matter what goes on
Know one thing; I love you a ton.
Nothing in this world will stop our love
It was a gift from the gods above.
I wont leave your side
I lay here with you till the final good bye.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Lol, the second line made me giggle. :] It was redundancy in a way, but it was cute for whatever reason. :]

    The rhyming could have been a little more creative in this poem and some of it was a bit forced. Like on and ton. I don't usually consider something a good rhyme if you have to change the way you say a word to make it rhyme.

    It was cute though. I hope your new romance stays with you. :]

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