Lol, the second line made me giggle. :] It was redundancy in a way, but it was cute for whatever reason. :]

The rhyming could have been a little more creative in this poem and some of it was a bit forced. Like on and ton. I don't usually consider something a good rhyme if you have to change the way you say a word to make it rhyme.

It was cute though. I hope your new romance stays with you. :]

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