Ohhw,,
like it lol

"the meaningless white lie,,
great!

5/5
xD
dirtyhands

I enjoyed reading this poem. I hope you keep writing.

Wow, in this you are like everything. from being transparent to being a addictive pain. To being fun, to being insane. lol. 5/5 for this one. it made me think.
Aaron

Very intense poem, I like how different each line was from the one before. I wish I had more to say other than it was beautiful.