The Physics of Smiling

by Vanessa   Nov 5, 2008


When the world turns upside down,
And all smiles turn to frowns,
I'll try and give you something to smile about.
But in return I'll ask you for a favor,
For you to stay with me, and give these dull days some flavor.
I'll ask you to hold my hand.
And help me understand,
The physics of smiling.
And in this upside down world, we'll be its awkward fling.

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  • 15 years ago

    by anonymous lover

    Aaaw...i think this poem is soo cute!!
    i really like the flow in this poem..
    the free style to it fits really good aswell!!

  • 15 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Wow, sounds like my ex. She always talked of her boring life, and I was the spice. lol. Well, she realized how spicy it would get, when danger from my past caught up. 5/5 for this poem as well.
    Aaron

  • 15 years ago

    by Conrad

    Love it. Perfect title. It caught my attention and didn't dissapoint. Great job.

  • 16 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    I think you brought out the physics of smiling in this poem. I especially liked the first two lines.

  • 16 years ago

    by chris

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